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PostSubject: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 11:38 am

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Ok, this is a thread, just one thread in which to do a rp in. There are no character sheets, no plot outline, nothing. How it will work is this:

I write the initial post (below), and from what I post, anyone can respond, adding a character or situation into the plot. From this, characters will interact, learn, grow, respond. Ideas are brought in, the plot is imposed on by whomever is posting.

For instance. I could post an initial thread where the subject is a park, giving details of a park, the time of day, and perhaps a character in the park. The next post from someone might have a character walking down the street to the park, notice something, perhaps they might just add more detail to the landscape, perhaps npc, birds, the way the day/night feels. The next person would add into that.

You can impose whatever you like on the scenario within your post, but if it involves other players, you have to give them a chance to respond to the situation/threat. You can't just have someone come up and shoot them dead, you could have someone come up and shoot at them, but the person shot at would then have the chance to notice the threat and avoid it, if its realistic to do so. I would also ask that you keep some manner of continuity. If the thread starts out in a city, don't have the situation stray from that unless you have a damn good reason to make the (lets say the park) suddenly be in a completely different area.

I have posted this in the fantasy section because it will have fantasy elements, but it can have other elements as well, such as vampires (and therefore horror?).

Let your creativity flow without being restricted to having everything planned out. Short posts, long posts, they are all welcome.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 11:42 am

The streets were mucky and wet. He looked down and the rain fell in droplets about his feet, trailing down from the long strands of hair that fell in front of his eyes to drop on his boots below. It was a miserable day. He sighed, and turned his gaze skywards, blue looking up only to find grey blackness of the clouds that night, nothing but the incessant falling of the tears of unknown gods upon the city that likely didn't deserve any.

His gaze moved as a young woman dashed from the shelter of one building across the street, escaping something behind her, or the rain, he couldn't tell. It didn't really matter to him which it was, for he had no interest in her plight. Tugging his coat closer to him, he wandered by the shops, most of them unlit and shuttered. It had been raining for weeks now as if it might never stop. Perhaps it wouldn't.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 12:47 pm

The rain helped to water down the red droplets that followed the woman.. They were lost in the streets, the color so much diffused that it was hard to see anything of it. And the rain went on. From the door the woman had fled came a man, tall and casually dressed. He was foreign, that much was obvious. The shape of his face suggested he was from one of the Asian areas, and if one was especially astute they might tag him as Korean. His hair was dyed a deep red, eyes dark, skin pale. He was holding some sort of meat on a plate, though the mean was obviously raw and still bloody. It was an odd shape too, but the details were hard to make out in the grey and the rain.

He peers where the woman ran from, all casualness, licking his fingers. He notices the walker in the rain, turning his attention toward him. After licking his lip clean of the juices from his meal he gives a smile and a nod in greeting.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 12:54 pm

He glances to where a figure now stands in the doorway, caught out the corner of his eye as he walked along. He should really be more careful with what he takes in, especially in this city. He should be more alert, but the water washes away the will to live almost, washes away tears, washes away the sparkle of life until only wet grime remains. You would think that the water would wash away the bad, but it only seems to soak it, make it press closer to your body and skin.

Noting the nod, he pauses mentally. What did that nod mean? What would a nod to any stranger mean? A casual hello? In another city, when the rain wasn't washing down like it was trying to drown everything under it, he might have thought so, but people kept to their own business in this town. It wasn't a friendly town, or he had never found it to be. Another reason then.

"Sour day" he said, his voice a bit rough around the edges, too much drink, too many cigarettes that he could almost feel the tar pressing against his lungs, eating away at them and his throat. He wanted a cigarette now, but with the rain so heavy it would only gutter and go out, ruining the little stick that cost so much money these days. He glanced at the plate of meat the man held. Dinner for the woman? Uncooked? Perhaps they had had a tiff. "You got any spare change?" he asked. He had lost his pride long ago.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:00 pm

"Its always a sour day." He mutters, moving inside just a bit to set his plate on the counter within. He smiles again, teeth glistening and white. He must bleach or something. He moves under the overhang, closer to the worn traveler. "Never stops raining." He sticks a hand out, and collects a few drops before withdrawing his hand.

"Change? No. But if you're hungry, the woman left her plate sitting. You can come inside and out of the rain if you like. No reason to let the food go to waste." He leaves the invitation open, wiping his hand on his pants before heading back inside. He leaves the door wide open. The light and warmth it promises was tempting, but even more so was the delicious smells of food. The man was either some sort of chef, or had a talent for cooking.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:05 pm

It was another in a series of cold, wet days and despite the gloomy undertone of the weather, there was a wide grin on this man's face. He loved the rain and was out in it as often as he could be. The coat he wore was only to keep warm, otherwise he had no umbrella or hat. Staring up into the sky, he let out a bellowing laugh, catching droplets of water into his mouth, over his eyelids and in strands of his already soaked black hair. He felt like a child again, arms spread soaked with rain. It was a freeing experience.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:10 pm

He looked at the plate, and the open door. In this city, it was not clever to take up random offers from strangers. It really was not. But he hadn't eaten anything decent for a while now, all his money going on whatever of the two addictions he could afford: drink or cigarettes. He looks down the road, but all he could see was the endless sheets of water streaming from the roofs, running along the pavements.

He looked back to the now open door where the man had disappeared into, the lush smell of food following after him. It almost made his mouth water. How long had it been since he had tasted good food? Was it worth the risk? The man seemed friendly enough, but you could never tell in this city, in any city. As if ushering him in, the rain only got heavier, perhaps crying for his life, or his stupidity. He moved inside.

The warmth and light moved over his shoddy soaked form as he stood there on the welcome mat, his gaze looking around the place. The place was lovely, like stepping into a story book and away from the real world he knew outside, this one was warm and enticing, an open fire, fine food, heat, light. Simple things, but ones he had almost forgotten existed in this city. "Good of you to share" he said, not talking about the food. He was dripping on the floor, a bedraggled man of unknown age, though grizzled enough in the city to be anything between mid twenties and early forties.

So used to the cold and wet, he had forgotten to close the door behind himself, and the bellowing laugh would make him flinch, moving to a wall. When was the last time anyone had laughed in this city, a laugh without worry or sarcasm? Perhaps they did all the time but he had never heard it. Perhaps stepping into the warmth of the house had given him a glimpse of another world he had long forgotten existed. He looked back out, his wary eyes catching a glimpse of an umbrella and the man there. It almost made him worried, almost made him afraid to hear such a sound, so alien to the city he knew.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:30 pm

Inside the door the worn wanderer would find a pleasant sort of place. It was small with two visible levels, the stairs visible, the basement entrance is unseen. It likely use to be a small pub, but was now a home. There was a fireplace, full of flames and a light and warmth. The food he had been speaking about was at the bar. There was some sort of grilled meat, either a beef or a thick fish, various veggies, fruits, and other tasty things. The plate he had set on the counter had the same sort of meat. Glasses by each were filled with wine, and the general decor was simple, mostly bare wood.

"Like I said, no reason for it to go to waste. I'm always happy for the company." He moves to the door to close it, pausing in the doorway to look at the one enjoying the rain. He raises a brow...and moves away from the door, leaving it open still.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:39 pm

As the rain intensified and began soaking through his coat, his rational mind kicked in, not dampening his joy, but reminding him that he could get himself sick, if he didn't dry off somewhere. He'd been in this city for no more than a week. The rain made leaving difficult, both because travel in this weather was hard to obtain and he had been traveling for so long without rain... without really enjoying it. He'd needed the break. And this seemed like the right city to escape to.

Lowering his face, he glanced around him. Listening to the rational part that told him to look for someplace to warm up, before he headed back to the place he was staying. An open door caught his and he approached carefully. Catching a whiff of some savory smell. Smelled quite nice. Double checking his pocket for his wallet, he paused at the open door and knocked on the jamb.

"Might I come in a warm-up for a short time?" he asked no one in particular as he was unsure who was in charge of the place. It might have been some sort of business, but just as easily it could be someone's home, so he dared not assume.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:46 pm

He found himself nodding a little, agreeing without knowing why. As the man came to close the door, he would move out the way and more into the warmth, creating a long trail of drips as he made his way to the fire. He hunched down close to it, still with his long coat on, its ends trailing on the floor, soaked through as he tried to warm up, yet unwilling yet to take off his coat.

As the sound came from the doorway, he looked up, nervous perhaps at this sound intruding on the scene. More people he didn't know. Though.. this one didn't sound like he knew the man who was hosting his dinner, so perhaps it was safety in numbers. Yes, it might be better if there was someone else around. He looked up, his sodden blue eyes peering from beneath long thin strands of hair so dark in the wet that it was difficult to tell what colour it truly was.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 1:53 pm

He went to attend to the fire once he'd left the door open. He picks up something by the fireplace and tosses it in with the flames. A keen eye might be able to pick it out as a detached human finger. It was soon eaten by the flames. He stands, watching the item burn before turning to his guests. He considers the happy wanderer a while, tilting his head ever so lightly, looking him over once.

"Fine. Close the door." He mutters shortly, running a hand through his hair. He licks his lips, eyes searching for the plate he'd put down. Notably the plate he'd left for the worn wanderer had cooked and seasoned meat on it.

"You." He motioned to the dripping, quiet, original guest. "Take that coat off. Dripping everywhere, I'll get you a towel." He speaks as he moved back behind the bar that served as a kitchen table. A few moments pass as he reappears with towl in hand, tossing it toward the dripping one. He briefly snags his plate before taking up a position in a rich, plush chair by the fire, facing the others. He bites into his raw meat.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 2:35 pm

He looked over the two inside as he waited for the answer to his request. The one nearest the door seemed uncomfortable and jumpy. He offered that one a hopefully reassuring smile. He had no intentions against anyone this night, no ulterior motives but to warm himself. He gaze moved top the man further in, who was looking at him quizzically, as though determining whether it was safe to allow him in. He waited patiently until the other spoke, reminding him to close the door.

"Of course and thank you." he spoke with a friendly, open smile on his face and bowed his head in appreciation. He did not expect any smiles in return from what he'd seen of the other two but then he had only just met them. Regardless of either of their reactions, his mood was still up in the beautiful storm clouds outside. Not only had the day been productive for him, he had been able to take time and enjoy the weather for a moment.

Only then, in the warmth did he realize how cold he'd really been outside, but he shook of the shivers that threatened and slipped out of his own coat, hanging it near the door. He stepped further in, wanting to speak to fill the silence, but he could think of nothing useful to say to the other two, as neither of them seemed the type for small talk.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 3:35 pm

He would blink at the sudden command from the host, and would find himself almost automatically taking off his coat before he could pause to think if it was a good idea. He hadn't considered the dripping, so used to staying out in the rough weather, but yes, in this place, it was not really that appropriate. He would take it off, but still hold it, unwilling to give up his coat to a stranger.

As the other man came in, he would nod a bit to him. Too friendly? He had never met anyone like that, not that had stayed in the city for too long anyhow. "New to the city?" he asked the man, taking a towel if offered and drying off his hair with casual swipes. He almost felt sorry for someone not touched yet by the sourness of the place. It would happen, unless the man moved on soon.

He would sit down at a seat beside the fire, opposite to their host, his gaze looking over to the man. "So what you do here? This your home? Looks like a bar"
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Fri May 01, 2009 4:30 pm

He gave a nod to the new guest's thanks, chewing on his meat, and ever so often dabbing his sleeve over his lips. His napkin was somewhere. Maybe the girl had grabbed it when she left. He didn't see it.

"Eat, or it'll get cold." He mutters at the worn one, motioning to the plate of food. He looks to the newcomer. "There's more in the back if you want it. Help yourself." Out back there was, indeed, a smaller portion of each, the meat sitting on a plat beside the grill, the varied veggies still on the stove under very low heat, to keep them warm. He also had not cleaned up after his cooking. The cutting board was decorated with blood from the fresh meat he'd cooked, there was skin of something in the sink still. Perhaps turnip or a second layer of potato, both which were included, though the carrot peels where in the trash.

He watches the newcomer for a moment before peering at the worn one. "No. I've lived here a while now, though I just bought this place. It use to be a bar. Got a good deal for it, was rather trashed when I bought it. Its a private residence now." He sets his plate on an endstand by the fire and rises to get his wine at the bar.

"As for what I do, I'm a chef and a food critic, depending on whats available, or paying more."
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Sat May 02, 2009 10:18 pm

A creaking from the stairs heralded her coming, but it was her pale face around the frame of a wall that gave sign to who she was. The face that peeked through was small, dark eyes that reflected the fire light shone from under a small brow hidden by bangs that ran straight across above her eyebrows. Her hair was midnight black, but it was impossible to tell at that angle just how long it was. Her features were predominantly asian, but there as a hint of something else indefinible. Pale fingers crept around the wall edge to grip with young fear. She seemed to be only slightly younger than the one that dominated the room, quietly chewing on his raw meat.

"Brother?" her accent was hard placed too, "Where is Nona?" her large dark oval eyes darted between the two newcomers, the worry etched on in her frown deepening. She finally came all the way around the wall and was revealed to be wearing a white cotton dress with long sleeves and a hem that reached well below her knees. Though the dress was unshapely, she still appeared thin and fragile looking. Her large eyes widened even further, "Brother?" her voice was small and pleading as she took in his reclining form. Her fingers twisted in front of her, silently dry wrashing and her hair was revealed to be a long braid that reached to the small of her back.
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Sun May 03, 2009 8:33 am

He lifted his glass of wine to his lips when the figure first came down the stairs. His eyes turned to his 'sister', this burden placed on him to care for. Couldn't see just run off like the rest of them did? Spread out and hace some fun, make a life? No. She was stuck with him. And he wasn't cruel enough to turn her away. Not like the others.

"I ate her." He said, matter of factly, biting and ripping his meat for effet. Those teeth were very fitting for the action. Like they were made for that purpose. "She left before dinner. I doubt she'll be coming back. I'll find you another nurse." He sighs and rises, moving over to where the frail girl stood. "Trina, you should go back to bed. You know how you get."
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PostSubject: Re: Response Freestyle RP   Mon May 04, 2009 12:40 am

Trina's large, dark oval eyes stared up at him. Her expression was unreadable, but her fingers quivered, just a little bit. She peered around himat the others, her eyes holding a little curiosity. Then she looked up at him once more, "I want to play..." she whispered quietly to him, there was even a note of petulant pleading.

She snaked her head around his frame again, but that was all the movement she had in her. She did not budge from her spot. "Nona..." she whispered, half calling, half considering. Her fingers found the end of her braid, pulled over her left shoulder and she stood there, barefoot, twitching the strands of her hair between her fingers. She was worried, it was plain on her face, but her voice was too soft and weak to carry what that worry actually was.

Her 'brother' she eyed half with a pleading light of one that needed to be saved, and half like a wary wildcat. Despite her frail body, it was face and eyes that bore her inner strength, one that belied her fragile state. Her toes wriggled and she placed a soft hand on his arm, on his sleeve, twitching a fold and smoothing the fabric, all done with an air of absent mindedness.

Her large eyes were dark on her pale face as she whispered once again, "Brother? Where is Nona?" She seemed to have forgotten the hand that was still place on his sleeve.
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